J.K. Baduini ([info]jkbaduini) wrote,
@ 2007-07-15 00:47:00
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Current mood: tired

Look! I'm Alive!
This was supposed to happen months ago. This is from my Creative Writing class final portfolio.



Tool of Darwin, Hand of God

The other day I saw a hawk.

She was young;
Her plumage was cream and gray and brown.
Dirty now, but in a few years, she will be
Resplendent.

Think about her talons—knives of demise.
Think about her beak—hook of termination.
Think about her wings—parachutes of ruin.

See her as a symbol:
Beautiful, fierce, free
See her as an animal:
A carnivore, mindless

Like an angel she descends
On all the small things.



More to come soon (I hope). Also, I may come back to this post later today tomorrow and pretty it up.




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[info]xlonelytylenolx
2007-07-15 04:12 pm UTC (link)
I hate to tell you this, but you're not actually alive. I killed you in you sleep last night. Oops.

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[info]ajat
2007-07-16 01:29 am UTC (link)
Mmm Nice one hey !

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[info]fluffyqueer
2007-07-20 08:24 pm UTC (link)
yep, you fixed it good. Think I only saw the cut before it... so I like this version.
Hope summer's going well.

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